The fence at the top is
Delicate
Girls always chase boys
Excitement
Think about your future
Life
&
War
Idolism is a sin
Fizzing
Get your bones shaking
Rebel
Celebrating peace not war
&
It’s the beauty within
Personality
What people are doing
Pop!
Livin’ the dream
Glamorous
&
Liar, liar, your pants are on fire
Hot
You’re in trouble now!
Handle
Don’t exaggerate your life
Atomic
&
Party till you drop!
Glossy
Life is too short to live
Friends
Make the most of it
Fantastic!
Highly commended
“Life is fun” by Christen Jellone (Year 9 Taieri College). Great spacing and line breaks which enhance the upbeat energy of the poem’s words.